Monday, December 28, 2009

Chapter 3 *( Colonel Jim was promoted to Sergent)( I change the story:))

An alley

" You sure there are Mutants in this house?" SHIELD soldier Daniel Trask ask. "Yeah the tracker is going mad here" Sergent Jim* said. Then motioning the others to gather around the house. Daniel Trask knock the door" Open Up now!!" An old lady open up, Sergent Jim force his way pass her. There was an old man and a young girl sitting at the table. "What is it you want, good soldier?" The old man ask. Daniel Trask shot the ceiling and yelled" Down ALL OF YOU!!!" The old man and the girl scrambled to the ground. "Where are the Mutants?!" Daniel Trask ask. "What mutants?" The old man ask. " You wanna play dumb?" Sergent Jim signaled some soldiers to search the house. "We are not hiding anything soldier!" The old man yelled. "Shut UP!" Daniel Trask kick the old man in the guts. "Dad!!" The young girl shouted. Sergent Jim snorted before shooting the ground."NOOOOO!" The old woman scream. As soon as he did that a blast hit the roof, a blue hair girl and a boy jump out carrying another boy who was servely wounded." Evan!" The old woman cried. " Noriko Ashida and Juilian Keller" Noriko sneered" You guys are MONSTERS!!" Then with her charging her gauntlets, she fired a blast at the SHIELD soldiers.

Rebellion base

The alarm rang, " Two Mutants down at New York Oriental Avenue!" Forge said. Captain America growled" Rogue, Sam, Kurt and Jubilee ome with me!" They jumpo on their bikes and rode off fast. " Who did you think it was Cap?" Jubilee ask. "Noriko and Juilian"* " OH! Let's Hurry!"

Rubbish dump

"You okay?" Noriko ask Juilian who was wounded in the arm. "Never felt better" Juilian answered. Noriko sigh"Im sorry Juilian i was angry" Suddenly there was alot of gunshots. " Come out you BITCH!" Sergent Jim shouted."Damn!Stay here Juilian!" Noriko fired her powers at Sergent jim who dodge. "You are quite tough soldier!" Noriko shouted going for a punch at the face. Sergent Jim dodge but Noriko kick him in the guts then fired her powers at him. Jim hit the wall. "Down for the count!" Suddenly there was a gunshot and Noriko felt pain in her arm. " Don't unerstimate me kid!"The Sergent said standing. His helmet was gone, and Noriko felt recognisaton" Logan? Wolverine?" "Not me kid!" Noriko blasted at him but he dodge punching her in the stomach. Then he grab her by the collar" You shall die now girl!" Noriko roared blasting Jim with full power. Suddenly the ground beneath them broke. They fell into the sewers. Noriko blasted jim into wall" Stop attacking us already!!Im sick of soldiers chasing us everywhere!" Jim punched her then kick her. Noriko lost control of her powers and kept blasting Jim everywhere. Jim growled pushing Noriko to the ground. As he did that he stab her in the guts her powers exploded the tunnels and the pipes exploded, then she black out. Jim radioed headquarters before blacking out.

Jim woke up in a forest. "Where the hell am i?" suddenly he heard chopter and gunshots sounds. He ran towards them. He saw the chopter crash into the trees Tony stark, Henry pym and Carol Danvers surrounded the Chopter. There was a roar and the one called Wolverine jump out unsheathing his claws."Bobby! Take Laura and go!" Bobby nodded grabbing a struggling girl" Logan!! I don't wanna leave you!" "Bobby GO!!!" Bobby shot an ice bridge and sped away with Laura. "Don't do this Logan!" Iron man shouted as Logan flew at him with his claws. Carol Danvers intercepted and punched logan into the trees before flying after him. Jim stared in shock and wonder then he heard tony stark say" Do you have that bullet Pym?" "Yeah, Lets go!"
However as soon as they ran to meet up with Carol, they found her with a slash wound in her guts. Stark growled, "Pym take care of Carol and give me the Adamantium bullets!" Meanwhile Logan had reach the end of the forest. Suddenly beams were shot at him, "Stark" " Logan you force me to do this!" Logan growled jumping off the cliff, the bullet shot into Logan's arm. The scence change to a dim lited cave, Logan was restricted to a rock" FurY!!!" Nick Fury came out of the dark " Im sorry Logan this is to protect you" " Protect what?!" Suddenly professor Xavier wheeled out of the darkness" This is for your good" Nick Fury and Xavier nodded. Xavier put his hand on Logan's head. :XAVIER!!!!!!" LOgan roared. The scene change to a SHIELD Medic bay, there jim recognised it all " I have got to wake up!!! I have been betrayed!!!!!"
End of Chapter 3

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